ext_237236 ([identity profile] astralavator.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] crankyoldman 2007-12-18 08:29 pm (UTC)

I’m sorry you’re having difficulty with your yuletide fic. Good luck on completion.

The previews of the Golden Compass are pretty awesome looking and all the dry parts with no plot significance will have to be cut in order to keep it condensed. Was all that explanation over Lyra’s childhood exploits necessary. If the kids weren’t here I’d have already seen it.

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