ext_79846 ([identity profile] venefica-aura.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] crankyoldman 2008-07-14 02:48 am (UTC)

Yeah, there was a lot of premise building in the first. I'll give it that. This second one handled exposition a lot better. ^^

~Cendri
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