God I love this story so much. I know you say Rin can be hard to write, but when you do it sounds so NATURAL. I mean, natural in that way that she reminds me of people that I know, people that I could touch or feel. It is so easy to picture her face, this poor girl who suddenly has all this power and doesn't really WANT it. She just wants to be happy, really.
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Date: 2008-03-29 06:54 pm (UTC)Who can fault her for trying to find herself?