The ending of this was so intense it sent little chilly even though Iffy and seeing it all seemed to have been set up it was still quite shocking.
I’m not sure how exactly I want to go about doing this. Lucrecia’s characterization here was so wonderful, even if it’s from Veld’s perspective she felt so fleshed out for her and how she was a part of hurting Iffy in the end it was so refreshing so suppose is the best way to say it. Veld clinging to his “I’m a little bit better” was so well done here. The narration and dialogue was so much fun to read.
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Date: 2008-02-12 02:54 am (UTC)I’m not sure how exactly I want to go about doing this. Lucrecia’s characterization here was so wonderful, even if it’s from Veld’s perspective she felt so fleshed out for her and how she was a part of hurting Iffy in the end it was so refreshing so suppose is the best way to say it. Veld clinging to his “I’m a little bit better” was so well done here. The narration and dialogue was so much fun to read.
So much awesome!!!!